ext_67877 ([identity profile] beautybecks.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] randomly_rusted 2010-08-29 09:43 am (UTC)

I have a HUGE grin on my face. You've captured the characters so well! I may have laughed out loud when Lestrade announced that Mycroft must be Sherlock's brother, bless him! I love the insights you've giving the reader into Lestrade's background, made it really believable. And commenting on the uniqueness of Sherlock and Mycroft's names was a nice touch, often overlooked.

I really enjoyed reading this. And excellent portrayal of the start of a relationship of sorts. Thank you for sharing :)

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